Monday, November 22, 2010
Wedding Pt.2 (22)
The is being planned as I speak I can't believe I have been waiting for this day since I met Victor. I'm concerned though something does not seem right. Oh well I'm sure it's nothing.Victor just told me he has a secret, he can only tell me after we are married. I can only hope it is nothing horrible as he was accused of murdering Henry ,no I'm sure It's nothing right.
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You made your character doubt which made her seem even more real than what you've worked to make her. Just watch out for small grammar stuff like leaving out "wedding" in this one and in your most recent one you left out a word at the beginning too. But good job anyways. :)
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